I figured I would do a minor rewrite of the page, cleaning up grammar and the rest and trying to link events that were happening concurrently a little more clearly. Some things I added in, which may or may not be entirely justifiable would be the comment on cultural subversion aka. Greater Good and the comments on Augura being the Tau's final bastion in the area (which I certainly can prove, but does seem to be the case being that shipyards and factories are mentioned as being destroyed by the end of the fight).
It might be worthwhile to pull the double reference of the Space Marine Chapter's later involved down to "other Chapter's had joined them", since they're detailed in a separate section on the page. -Wulfenbach 22:30, July 19, 2010 (UTC)
I've done the final edit on the page and it's fine now as is; many of your revisions were helpful. Let's move on. Montonius 02:11, July 20, 2010 (UTC)